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strawberry walls by ~canniblisticskunk:iconcanniblisticskunk:



It's that time of year
with forgive me not's
and bleeding hearts
as young teenagers
slit their wrist, painting
the walls with sinned blood
with raindrop loops hanging
from forgotten trees
as fly's eat away at runaway kids

Its that time of year
were flowers die away
and girls say goodbye to their hearts
giving them to immature boys
just so they can tear them apart

Its that time of year
when trees shed their leaves
covering up our mistaken tracks
when preps and jocks have nothing to do
but make fun of us and call us names

Its that time of year
when you just want to stay inside and die
but when the outside is calling your name
to let you run away from all the bad things
when all there need is  to fuck up your life
but when you take a look outside you see happiness
in the little childrens face and you think it could be them one day
hanging them selves from trees and wanting to die right on the spot
so it gives you a reason to forget about the sluts and drugs
that only want to make you more depressed at this pity time of year
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Submitted: April 18
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well the end was like throw up out of my mind so if it doesnt make sense idc
i was sitting outside on my swing looking around and it gave me good ideas to right about this is like the first real poem ive written

i kinda feel thins way today ive kinda felt this way all month
its weird so ya i hope you like it just a bit

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~13norwitch:icon13norwitch: Apr 18, 2008, 4:41:09 PM
aww maddie :( dont be sad or depressed...as for the bitches and the fuckers at school...forget about them. they suck. and you know what? there are better people who care about you and want to hear about it when your sad. (me anyways) i would be ok with you just....letting it ALL go. just tell me.

as for the poem itself..nicely written :) i like the ending...it gives it a little...quark...:D

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the topic of homosexuality is like a circle. you can only be so far one way before you start coming back around again.
~canniblisticskunk:iconcanniblisticskunk: Apr 18, 2008, 6:59:20 PM
well i was asad but ive put it behind me so im all cool right now
ya i know you would be okay with it anyways

and thanxs!:blahblah:

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every time i dress up as a skunk....i EAT RAINBOWS!

you've taken my hopes,my dreams,my streghth, my courage, my breathe, my mind, but worst of all you've taken my heart
~13norwitch:icon13norwitch: Apr 18, 2008, 10:11:22 PM
:hug: ok good

as long as you know what

^^ welcome!!

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the topic of homosexuality is like a circle. you can only be so far one way before you start coming back around again.
~Spottedstorm:iconSpottedstorm: Apr 19, 2008, 6:11:40 AM
Yah maddie I agree with jessica. The hardest thing about middle school is feeling like you shouldn't speak you mind, you should always tell us if yo need to get it out. Yell now and make us take it. Seriously.:cling:

I do like the poem though. its good.

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JPEGS ARE THE FACE OF EVIL!!!!
~canniblisticskunk:iconcanniblisticskunk: Apr 19, 2008, 7:34:48 AM
i know thanxs

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every time i dress up as a skunk....i EAT RAINBOWS!

you've taken my hopes,my dreams,my streghth, my courage, my breathe, my mind, but worst of all you've taken my heart
~canniblisticskunk:iconcanniblisticskunk: Apr 19, 2008, 7:41:13 AM
i know what?

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every time i dress up as a skunk....i EAT RAINBOWS!

you've taken my hopes,my dreams,my streghth, my courage, my breathe, my mind, but worst of all you've taken my heart
~13norwitch:icon13norwitch: Apr 19, 2008, 7:56:27 AM
oopsie! i meant know that

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the topic of homosexuality is like a circle. you can only be so far one way before you start coming back around again.
~Spottedstorm:iconSpottedstorm: Apr 19, 2008, 6:27:01 PM
good =^.^=

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JPEGS ARE THE FACE OF EVIL!!!!
~canniblisticskunk:iconcanniblisticskunk: Apr 19, 2008, 6:50:49 PM
ooo
yes i know??

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every time i dress up as a skunk....i EAT RAINBOWS!

you've taken my hopes,my dreams,my streghth, my courage, my breathe, my mind, but worst of all you've taken my heart